Cleopatra (Original) - Revision history

Astrozac at 05:50, 30 March 2017

2017-03-30T05:50:28Z

2017-03-30T04:32:16Z

image size

2017-03-30T04:30:05Z

restructure, run-on sentence removal

2016-12-19T06:57:08Z

2015-09-26T15:49:32Z

remove event-list test code

2015-09-24T05:37:17Z

holding ground for new event list - testing

2015-09-14T18:37:42Z

2015-09-13T01:21:45Z

Adding type and subtype

2015-09-10T21:41:15Z

2015-05-21T05:38:37Z

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 |history      =
-A superhero operating during the 50's, 60's, and well into the 70's. '''Cleopatra''' was a founding member of Honor Guard. Despite Royal's somewhat unflattering description, she could hold her own quite well in a fight. Her powers were not trifling.
+A superhero operating during the 1950's, 60's, and well into the 70's. '''Cleopatra''' was a founding member of Honor Guard. Despite Royal's somewhat unflattering description, she could hold her own quite well in a fight. Her powers were not trifling.
 |powers       =

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 |Box title    =
 |image        = Image:CleopatraI.jpg
-|imagewidth   = 250
+|imagewidth   = 300
 |status       = Inactive
 |realname     =

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 {{character page
 |intro        =
-A superhero during the 50's, 60's and 70's, the original Cleopatra was a founding member of Honor Guard. She has a modern day successor, Cleopatra II.
+''She'd been white, blonde, like 5' 4" -- always perky, reassuring, like she'd save the day and then hand out Rice Krispie squares.''
 |history      =
 |powers       =
-She carries a power staff and has the ability of flight
+* Has the ability of flight.
 |equipment    =
 |observations =
 |speculations =
 |timelines    =
 |footnotes    =
 }}
-{{stub2}}
+{{stub}}
 [[Category: Heroes]]

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 |status       = Inactive
 |realname     =
-|debut        = {{KBAC1}} [[1:2|#2]]
+|debut        =
 |earliest = 1959
 |origin       =
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 |headlines    =
-|appearances  = {{KBAC1}} [[1:2|#2]]<br>
+|appearances  = {{KBAC1}} [[{{KBAC1}} No.2|#2]]<br>
-{{KBAC2}} [[2:13|#13]], [[2:14|14]], [[2:16|16]], [[2:19|19]] <br>
+{{KBAC2}} [[{{KBAC2}} No.13|#13]], [[{{KBAC2}} No.14|14]], [[{{KBAC2}} No.16|16]], [[{{KBAC2}} No.19|19]] <br>
-{{LH}} [[LH:4|#4]] <BR>
+{{LH}} [[{{LH}} No.4|#4]] <BR>
 [[{{ACA}}]]<br>
-{{DA1}} [[DA1:4|#4]]<br>
+{{DA1}} [[{{DA1}} No.4|#4]]<br>
-{{DA2}} [[DA2:1|#1]] <br>
+{{DA2}} [[{{DA2}} No.1|#1]] <br>
-{{BEAUTIE}} [[CS:Beautie|#1]] <Br>
+{{BEAUTIE}} [[{{BEAUTIE}}|#1]] <Br>
 }}

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 |footnotes    =
 }}
 {{stub2}}
 [[Category: Heroes]]

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 |earliest = 1959
 |origin       =
-|affiliation  = founding member of the [[Honor Guard]]
+|affiliation  = founding member of [[Honor Guard]]
 |baseops      = [[Astro City]]
 |rangeops     =

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