Mermaid - Revision history

Infobroker at 20:22, 6 January 2018

2018-01-06T20:22:57Z

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2017-10-01T01:19:28Z

2017-09-27T05:47:04Z

hiding spoiler alert

2017-09-27T00:55:25Z

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2017-04-26T22:07:20Z

adding background material

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2017-03-31T05:51:17Z

link to issues

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 [[image:MermaidHS.jpg|150px|left]]
-An encounter with [[Skinner Bones]] and [[the Plunder Squad]], we she an older, yet still powerful, and every bit as regal Mermaid in action. Very matronly.
+An encounter with [[Skinner Bones]] and [[the Plunder Squad]], when she was an older, yet still powerful, and every bit as regal Mermaid in action. Very matronly.
 |powers       =
-* During her encounters with [[Mister Manta]], she has displayed impressive underwater skills, swimming with extended endurance, and for long distances.  Her entire race seems to possess a superior muscular anatomy compare to most surface-dwelling humans, along with vastly enhanced stamina for arduous tasks.
+* During her battles with [[Mister Manta]], she has displayed impressive underwater skills, swimming with extended endurance, and for long distances.  Her entire race seems to possess a superior muscular anatomy compare to most surface-dwelling humans, along with vastly enhanced stamina for arduous tasks.
 |equipment    =

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 |history      =
 [[image:MermaidHS.jpg|150px|left]]
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 |date = June 15th, 2017
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 |date = June 15th, 2017
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 |powers       =
-* During her encounters with [[Mister Manta]], she has displayed impressive underwater skills, swimming with extended endurance, and for long distances.  Her entire race seems to possess superior muscular compare to most surface-dwelling humans, along with stamina for arduous tasks.
+* During her encounters with [[Mister Manta]], she has displayed impressive underwater skills, swimming with extended endurance, and for long distances.  Her entire race seems to possess a superior muscular anatomy compare to most surface-dwelling humans, along with vastly enhanced stamina for arduous tasks.
 |equipment    =

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 |observations =
-* Based on appearances, Mermaid's people are a distinct humanoid species or sub-species.  Across their race, there are shared common abilities, they have similar genetic compositions.  They seem to be a proud species, also possessing that rarest of qualities, a quiet humility and graceful demeanor.
+* Based on appearances, Mermaid's people are a distinct humanoid species or sub-species.  Across their race, there are shared common abilities, they have similar genetic compositions.
 |speculations =
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 |earliest     = early 1960s
 |origin       =
-|affiliation  = [[Honor Guard]]
+|affiliation  = [[Honor Guard]] <br>
-|baseops      =
+Citizen of Oceania
-|rangeops     =
+|baseops      = Her home city-state of Oceania
 |relatives    =
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 |powers       =
-While her powers have never really been defined or shown, it would be assumed that they are aquatic in nature and she would have the ability to breath under water.
+* During her encounters with [[Mister Manta]], she has displayed impressive underwater skills, swimming with extended sundurance and for long distances.  Her entire race seems to possess superior muscular to surface dwelling humans, along with stamina for arduous tasks.
 |equipment    =
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 {{character page
 |intro        =
-Aquatic, light-greenish colored former member of [[Honor Guard]].
+She is an Oceanian. An underwater race yes, but also able to pull life giving oxygen from surface atmosphere. She had been a member of Honor Guard for many years. She now spends most of her time patrolling the oceans of earth, doing her best to keep things safe above and below the vast watery ways.
 |history      =

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 {{DA3}} [[{{DA3}} No.3|#3]] <br>
 {{DA4}} [[{{DA4}} No.4|#4]] <br>
-{{AC}} #17, 25, 42 <br>
+{{AC}} [[{{AC}} No.17|#17]], [[{{AC}} No.25|25]], [[{{AC}} No.42|42]] <br>
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