Team Carnivore - Revision history

Infobroker: remove redundant sentence.

2017-03-17T01:56:15Z

remove redundant sentence.

2017-03-17T01:54:05Z

more cleaning

2017-03-16T03:44:08Z

image size

2017-03-16T03:37:46Z

clean ups

2016-12-19T07:20:10Z

2016-03-31T03:45:12Z

2016-03-31T03:44:43Z

2016-03-31T03:23:05Z

Run-on sentence

2015-10-24T06:58:00Z

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 {{character page
 |intro        =
-A group of five humans with enhanced powers and well defined animal based characteristics. They are suspected of being the victims, voluntary or otherwise, of genetic experimentation by [[TransGene International]].
+A group of five humans suspected of being the victims, voluntary or otherwise, of genetic experimentation by [[TransGene International]].
 |history      =

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 |history      =
-In 2003, they attempted to capture and return [[Roustabout]], another suspected Transgene mutation, to their secluded and highly secretive labs for further studies.
+In 2003, they attempted to capture and return [[Roustabout]], another suspected mutation, to '''TransGene's''' secluded and highly secretive labs for further studies.
 |powers       =
-They appear as mutated versions of a human snake, a bear, a lion, a bird of prey, and a wolf. They display enhanced strengths and abilities depending on the particular animal DNA source material used for their  mutation.
+Each member is a mutated human version of five highly aggressive animal species. A snake, a bear, a lion, a bird of prey, and a wolf. They display enhanced strengths and abilities depending on the particular animal DNA strain that was used for their mutation.
 |equipment    =

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 {{character infobox2
 |image        = image:TeamCarnivore.jpg
-|imagewidth   = 350
+|imagewidth   = 320
 |status       = Captured(2003)
 |realname     =

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 {{character page
 |intro        =
-A group of five genetically altered humans with animal characteristics, suspected of having been created by [[TransGene International]].
+A group of five humans with enhanced powers and well defined animal based characteristics. They are suspected of being the victims, voluntary or otherwise, of genetic experimentation by [[TransGene International]].
 |history      =
-They attempted to recapture Roustabout in 2003.
+In 2003, they attempted to capture and return [[Roustabout]], another suspected Transgene mutation, to their secluded and highly secretive labs for further studies.
 |powers       =
-They appear as mutated versions of a human snake, bear, lion, bird of prey and wolf, with enhanced strengths and abilities depending on the animal they're mutated with.
+They appear as mutated versions of a human snake, a bear, a lion, a bird of prey, and a wolf. They display enhanced strengths and abilities depending on the particular animal DNA source material used for their  mutation.
 |equipment    =

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 |status       = Captured(2003)
 |realname     =
-|debut        = {{LH}} [[LH:3|#3]]
+|debut        =
 |earliest     = 2003
 |origin       =
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 |headlines    =
-|appearances  = {{LH}} [[LH:3|#3]]
+|appearances  = {{LH}} [[{{LH}} No.3|#3]] <BR>
 }}
 {{character page

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 }}
 {{character page
-|intro        = A group of five genetically altered humans with animal characteristics, suspected of having been created by [[TransGene International]], who attempted to recapture Roustabout in 2003.
+|intro        =
 |history      =
-|powers       = They appear as mutated versions of a human snake, bear, lion, bird of prey and wolf, with enhanced strengths and abilities depending on the animal they're mutated with.
+They attempted to recapture Roustabout in 2003.
 |equipment    =
 |observations =
 |speculations =
 |timelines    =
 |footnotes    =
 }}
 [[Category: Villainous Teams and Groups]] [[Category: Non-Astro City Based Villains]]

← Older revision		Revision as of 06:58, 24 October 2015
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−	[[Category: ~~Villains]] [[Category: Villain~~ Groups]] [[Category: Non-Astro City Based Villains]]	+	[[Category: Villainous Teams and Groups]] [[Category: Non-Astro City Based Villains]]

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+{{character infobox2
-Team Carnivore
+|relatives    =
+|aliases      =
-A group of five genetically altered humans with animal characteristics, suspected of having been created by TransGene International, who attempted to recapture Roustabout.
+|occupation   =
-[edit]
+|birthdate    =
-Appearances
+|maritalstatus =
+|height       =
-LH:3
+|weight       =
 [[Category: Villains]] [[Category: Villain Groups]] [[Category: Non-Astro City Based Villains]]