The All-American - Revision history

Infobroker: spell check

2017-02-17T21:17:19Z

spell check

Infobroker: clean ups

2017-02-17T21:16:14Z

clean ups

Astrozac at 06:49, 13 December 2016

2016-12-13T06:49:12Z

Infobroker: clean ups

2016-02-08T21:54:14Z

clean ups

Astrozac at 07:28, 8 November 2015

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Astrozac at 05:53, 9 June 2015

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Astrozac at 06:55, 1 June 2014

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Infobroker at 17:56, 18 April 2014

2014-04-18T17:56:45Z

Infobroker: more minor fixups

2014-04-18T17:53:55Z

more minor fixups

Infobroker: clean ups

2014-04-18T17:51:03Z

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 {{character page
 |intro        =
-A patriotic, World War II hero. He was active for the next decade or so. His scientist uncle, who transformed him from a football star into a juggernaut qith super-heroic levels of strength, endurance and athleticism. He usually teamed with his  sidekick, [[Slugger|Slugger the Junior Dynamo]].
+A patriotic, World War II hero. He was active for the next decade or so. His scientist uncle, who transformed him from a football star into a juggernaut with super-heroic levels of strength, endurance and athleticism. He usually teamed with his  sidekick, [[Slugger|Slugger the Junior Dynamo]].
 |history      =

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 {{character page
 |intro        =
-A patriotic, football themed hero of the World War II era and the decade or so thereafter. He was transformed by his scientist uncle's experiments from a football star to super-heroic levels of strength, endurance and athleticism. He also teamed with a sidekick, [[Slugger|Slugger the Junior Dynamo]].
+A patriotic, World War II hero. He was active for the next decade or so. His scientist uncle, who transformed him from a football star into a juggernaut qith super-heroic levels of strength, endurance and athleticism. He usually teamed with his  sidekick, [[Slugger|Slugger the Junior Dynamo]].
 |history      =
-In 1943, along with Slugger, stopped a bank robbery by the [[Time-Keeper]].
+In 1943, along with Slugger, he prevented a bank robbery by the [[Time-Keeper]].
 |powers       =
-As a result of scientific alteration, his body is at the very peak of athleticism.
+As a result of scientific alteration, his body performs at the very peak of athleticism.
 |equipment    =
 |observations =
-He and Slugger were active in the European theater of World War II.
+He and Slugger had several exploits in the European theater during World War II.
 |speculations =
-There is conflicting information about the All-American. One report has him being killed by a sniper's bullet in the Korean War as mentioned in the 2004 [[Astro City: A Visitor's Guide|Visitor's Guide]], while [[Elliot Mills]] mentions that the All-American along with the [[Lamplighter]] had just retired in 1959. That suggests the possibility that someone else, possibly a grown-up Slugger, donned the costume and assumed the role of the All-American for a handful of years following  Appleton's death. <br>
+There is conflicting information about the All-American. One report has him being killed by a sniper's bullet in the Korean War as mentioned in the 2004 [[Astro City: A Visitor's Guide|Visitor's Guide]], while [[Elliot Mills]] mentions that the All-American along with the [[Lamplighter]] had just retired in 1959. That suggests the possibility that someone else, possibly a grown-up Slugger, donned the costume and assumed the role of the All-American for a handful of years following  Appleton, the original All-American's death. <br>
-There is a possible link between the All-American and Slugger somehow involved in the [[Commando K|the Commando K Project]] and U.S. Government covert operations.
+There is a possible link between the All-American and Slugger being involved in the [[Commando K|the Commando K Project]] and U.S. Government covert operations.
 |timelines    =

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 |headlines    =
-|appearances  = {{WP}} [[WP:1/2|#1/2]]<br>
+|appearances  = {{WP}} [[{{WP}} No.1/2|#1/2]]<br>
-{{SA}} [[CS:SA 1|#1]] <br>
+{{SA}} [[{{SA}} No.1|#1]] <br>
 }}
 {{character page

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 There is conflicting information about the All-American. One report has him being killed by a sniper's bullet in the Korean War as mentioned in the 2004 [[Astro City: A Visitor's Guide|Visitor's Guide]], while [[Elliot Mills]] mentions that the All-American along with the [[Lamplighter]] had just retired in 1959. That suggests the possibility that someone else, possibly a grown-up Slugger, donned the costume and assumed the role of the All-American for a handful of years following  Appleton's death. <br>
-There could also be a link between the All-American and Slugger somehow involved in the [[Commando K|the Commando K Project]] and U.S. Government covert operations.
+There is a possible link between the All-American and Slugger somehow involved in the [[Commando K|the Commando K Project]] and U.S. Government covert operations.
 |timelines    =

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 |headlines    =
 |appearances  = {{WP}} [[WP:1/2|#1/2]]<br>
-{{SA}} #1
+{{SA}} [[CS:SA 1|#1]] <br>
 }}
 {{character page

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 |image        = File:All-american.jpg
 |imagewidth   = 300
-|status       = Now Deceased, he retired twice, the final occurrence in 1959
+|status       = Conflicting statuses
 |realname     = Johnny Appleton
 |debut        = {{WP}} [[WP:1/2|#1/2]]

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 |speculations =
-There is conflicting information about the All-American. One report has him being killed by a sniper's bullet in the Korean War. While [[Elliot Mills]] mentions that the All-American along with the [[Lamplighter]] had just retired in 1959. <br>
+There is conflicting information about the All-American. One report has him being killed by a sniper's bullet in the Korean War. While [[Elliot Mills]] mentions that the All-American along with the [[Lamplighter]] had just retired in 1959. That suggests the possibility that someone else, possibly a grown-up Slugger, donned the costume and assumed the role of the All-American for a handful of years following  Appleton's death. <br>
-There could also be a link between the All-American, Slugger, [[Commando K]]/The Commando K Project and the U.S. Government's covert involvement]].
+There could also be a link between the All-American and Slugger somehow involved in the [[Commando K]]/the Commando K Project and U.S. Government covert operations]].
 |timelines    =
 |footnotes    =
 }}