The Confessor (Brian Kinney) - Revision history

Infobroker at 12:43, 16 May 2021

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Astrozac at 07:58, 20 December 2016

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Astrozac at 07:57, 20 December 2016

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Astrozac at 05:39, 16 May 2016

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Infobroker at 02:01, 31 October 2015

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Infobroker at 01:56, 31 October 2015

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Infobroker at 01:49, 31 October 2015

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Infobroker at 22:19, 30 October 2015

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Astrozac at 18:28, 30 October 2015

2015-10-30T18:28:43Z

Infobroker: Seriously. Viewers can go to the Altar Boy page for those appearances

2015-08-25T17:58:36Z

Seriously. Viewers can go to the Altar Boy page for those appearances

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 Before coming to Astro City, Brian Kinney had been brought up by his single father, a rural doctor. The elder Kinney, always compassionate, treated everyone in the small community who needed his help, even those who were too poor to pay their medical expenses. As a result, he was perceived by some as a sucker who could be taken advantage of, and Brian grew up in miserable economic straits. Brian came to greatly resent his father for this, and he vowed to become someone people respected when he grew up. He vowed to become a superhero.
-He spent years preparing for this goal, learning martial arts and doing research, lots of research. When he reached young adulthood in 1997, he took a one-way bus to Astro City. Hoping to be taken under one of the city's many heroes' wing, he took a job at the superhero bar [[Bruiser's]]. Its owner, K.O. Carson, sensed Brian's goal and referred him to another establishment,[[Butler's]].  This was a more refined eatery, and Mr. Carson knew Brian would be more likely to meet the type of heroes he needed, at a time and situation where they would be more open to recruiting. Thus Brian came to the attentions of [[The Confessor (Jeremiah Parrish)|The Confessor]].
+He spent years preparing for this goal, learning martial arts and doing research, lots of research. When he reached young adulthood in 1997, he took a one-way bus ride to Astro City. Hoping to be taken under one of the city's many heroes' wing, he took a job at the superhero bar [[Bruiser's]]. Its owner, K.O. Carson, sensed Brian's goal and referred him to another establishment,[[Butler's]].  This was a more refined eatery, and Mr. Carson knew Brian would be more likely to meet the type of heroes he needed, at a time and situation where they would be more open to recruiting. Thus Brian came to the attentions of [[The Confessor (Jeremiah Parrish)|The Confessor]].
 During his time as [[Altar Boy]], in large part through the Confessor's mentorship, Brian came to understand that being a superhero was about helping others, not whatever acclaim or respect that might result. He came to understand that his father, regardless of how others viewed him, had been a hero in his own right.

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-|appearances  = {{KBAC2}} [[2:9|#9]]<br>
+|appearances  = {{KBAC2}} [[{{KBAC2}} No.9|#9]]<br>
 {{AC}} [[{{AC}} No.1|#1]], 7, 8, 9, 10, 12 <bR>
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 |status       = Active
 |realname     = Brian Kinney
-|debut        = {{KBAC2}} [[2:9|#9]]
+|debut        =
 |AF1title     = First Appearance:
 |AF1info      = Late 2001
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 |appearances  = {{KBAC2}} [[2:9|#9]]<br>
-{{AC}} [[3:1|#1]], 7, 8, 9, 10, 12 <bR>
+{{AC}} [[{{AC}} No.1|#1]], 7, 8, 9, 10, 12 <bR>
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 |headlines    =
 |appearances  = {{KBAC2}} [[2:9|#9]]<br>
-{{AC}} #1, 7, 8, 9, 10, 12 <bR>
+{{AC}} [[3:1|#1]], 7, 8, 9, 10, 12 <bR>
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 ===Making New Friends with Old Allies===
-After learning of [[Winged Victory]] being accused of masterminding super-villain attacks, Brian stealthily breaks into her main headquarters,[[Samothrace|Samothrace One]], but is caught hacking the computer systems by her "caped boyfriend" [[Samaritan]] who presumably kept tabs on the school. Brian astounds the superhumanly swift and nigh invulnerable hero by not only keeping out of reach for several seconds but also effectively mounting a counter-attack, striking at special pressure points on Samaritan's body. When this proves insufficient Brian, explaining that he will hunt down any means of evening the odds, pulls out a coin-sized item that upon contact causes the energy that empowers Samaritan to erupt and immobilize him.
+After learning of [[Winged Victory]] being accused of masterminding super-villain attacks, Brian stealthily breaks into her main headquarters, Samothrace One, but is caught hacking the computer systems by her "caped boyfriend" [[Samaritan]] who presumably keeps tabs on the school. Brian astounds the superhumanly swift and nigh invulnerable hero by not only keeping out of reach for several seconds but also effectively mounting a counter-attack, striking at special pressure points on Samaritan's body. When this proves insufficient Brian, while explaining that he will hunt down any means of evening the odds, pulls out a coin-sized item that upon contact causes the energy that empowers Samaritan to erupt and immobilize him.
-Immediately confronted by Winged Victory, Brian assures her he believes she is being framed and that he is there to uncover the truth. He apologizes to Samaritan who tells him to "think nothing of it." Brian shows them that he has found within Samothrace's computer systems, falsified but convincing records of on-going communications between Winged Victory and various well-known and not so well-known villains.  Using human logic and complex heuristics-based computer algorithms, he has started composing a list of suspects. Winged Victory is impressed by the list and she and Samaritan offer to contribute, the latter revealing some of the capabilities of his [[The Zyxometer|zyxometer]] which intrigues Brian.
+Immediately confronted by Winged Victory, Brian assures her he believes she is being framed and that he is there to uncover the truth. He apologizes to Samaritan who tells him to "think nothing of it." Brian shows them that he has found within Samothrace's computer systems, falsified but convincing records of on-going communications between Winged Victory and various well-known and not so well-known villains.  Using human logic and complex heuristics-based computer algorithms, he has started composing a list of suspects. Winged Victory is impressed by the list and she and Samaritan offer to contribute, the latter revealing some of the capabilities of his [[The Zyxometer|Zyxometer]] which intrigues Brian.
 Wondering what Winged Victory thinks of it all, Brian monitors through her own security cameras as she invites [[E.A.G.L.E.]] onto the premises and takes to the air, leaving it in their hands.

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 |powers       =
-The current Confessor has no vampire related powers, instead using voice modulators and tricks to inspire fear in the hearts of evil-doers. However, Brian Kinney is trained in martial arts, possesses keen detective skills, and maintains a rigorous physical training schedule, including four years of training around the world before assuming the full guise of the Confessor.
+The current Confessor has no vampire related powers, instead using voice modulators and tricks to inspire fear in the hearts of evil-doers. Brian Kinney is also trained in martial arts, possesses keen detective skills, and maintains a rigorous physical training schedule, including four years of elite fighter training around the world before assuming the full guise of the Confessor.
-He also possesses computer hacking skills on a level that would make him among the world's most elite and technical knowledge sufficient to evaluate highly advanced security systems.
+He also possesses computer hacking skills on a level that would make him among the world's most advanced, showing technical knowledge sufficient to qualify for highly advanced security systems positions.
 |equipment    =
-Brian has profited well from the wealth of information, the collection of items and the renown (both the good and the bad) assembled by his predecessor during his long life span.
+Brian has profited well from the wealth of information, and the collection of unique items(both the good and the bad) assembled by his predecessor over his extended life span.
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 ===Brian Kinney's Ambition to be a Super Hero===
-Before coming to Astro City, Brian Kinney had been brought up by his single father, a rural doctor. The elder Kinney, always compassionate, treated everyone in the community who needed his help, even those who were too poor to pay their medical expenses. As a result, he was perceived by some as a sucker who could be taken advantage of, and Brian grew up in miserable economic straits. Brian came to greatly resent his father for this, and he vowed to become someone people respected when he grew up. He vowed to become a superhero.
+Before coming to Astro City, Brian Kinney had been brought up by his single father, a rural doctor. The elder Kinney, always compassionate, treated everyone in the small community who needed his help, even those who were too poor to pay their medical expenses. As a result, he was perceived by some as a sucker who could be taken advantage of, and Brian grew up in miserable economic straits. Brian came to greatly resent his father for this, and he vowed to become someone people respected when he grew up. He vowed to become a superhero.
 He spent years preparing for this goal, learning martial arts and doing research, lots of research. When he reached young adulthood in 1997, he took a one-way bus to Astro City. Hoping to be taken under one of the city's many heroes' wing, he took a job at the superhero bar [[Bruiser's]]. Its owner, K.O. Carson, sensed Brian's goal and referred him to another establishment,[[Butler's]].  This was a more refined eatery, and Mr. Carson knew Brian would be more likely to meet the type of heroes he needed, at a time and situation where they would be more open to recruiting. Thus Brian came to the attentions of [[The Confessor (Jeremiah Parrish)|The Confessor]].

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 |appearances  = {{KBAC2}} [[2:9|#9]]<br>
 {{AC}} #1,7,8,9,10, 12 <bR>
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