The Doors - Revision history

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Astrozac at 06:31, 29 May 2016

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 |notes =
-... appeared quietly, mysteriously and quite suddenly over the [[Gaines River]] in 2013. They attracted a lot of attention from all over the world.  When they opened, a [[Telseth|large humanoid form]], about twenty to thirty feet in height emerged.  He talked of being an ambassador or representative from the "start-spanning Kvurri."  Not much other information about himself or his civilization has been forthcoming.  But he has a learned a great deal about us.  He has also recruited a human, [[Ben Pullam]] as an Earthling representative to learn more.
+... appeared quietly, mysteriously and quite suddenly over the [[Gaines River]] in the summer of 2013. They attracted a lot of attention from all over the world.  When they opened, a [[Telseth|large humanoid form]], about twenty to thirty feet in height emerged.  He talked of being an ambassador or representative from the "start-spanning Kvurri."  Not much other information about himself or his civilization has been forthcoming.  But he has a learned a great deal about us.  He has also recruited a human, [[Ben Pullam]] as an Earthling representative to learn more.
 Ben has gone through the Doors, and into whatever is on the other side. He hasn't come back out.
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 'Into' isn't quite the right term.  It seems more a portal to a place with largish, but not outrageous dimensions.  Similar to a cargo ship perhaps.  Big enough to carry an ample supply of artifacts and samples of earth culture back to wherever.
-The Doors still hover over the river. Opening for supplies and samples. Not much else. So far...
+The Doors still hover over the river. Opening for earth supplies and samples. Not much else. So far...
 |creator =

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 'Into' isn't quite the right term.  It seems more a portal to a place with largish, but not outrageous dimensions.  Similar to a cargo ship perhaps.  Big enough to carry an ample supply of artifacts and samples of earth culture back to wherever.
-The Doors still hover over the river. Opening for supplies and samples. Not much else.
+The Doors still hover over the river. Opening for supplies and samples. Not much else. So far...
 |creator =

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-'''{{PAGENAME}}''' appeared quietly, mysteriously and quite suddenly over the [[Gaines River]] in 2013. They attracted a lot of attention from all over the world.  When they opened, a [[Telseth|large humanoid form]], about twenty to thirty feet in height emerged.  He talked of being an ambassador or representative from the "start-spanning Kvurri."  Not much other information about himself or his civilization has been forthcoming.  But he has a learned a great deal about us.  He has also recruited a human, [[Ben Pullam]] as an Earthling representative to learn more.
+... appeared quietly, mysteriously and quite suddenly over the [[Gaines River]] in 2013. They attracted a lot of attention from all over the world.  When they opened, a [[Telseth|large humanoid form]], about twenty to thirty feet in height emerged.  He talked of being an ambassador or representative from the "start-spanning Kvurri."  Not much other information about himself or his civilization has been forthcoming.  But he has a learned a great deal about us.  He has also recruited a human, [[Ben Pullam]] as an Earthling representative to learn more.
 Ben has gone through the Doors, and into whatever is on the other side. He hasn't come back out.

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 |image   = TheDoor.jpg
 |imagewidth = 200
-|name = Astrobank Tower
+|name = {{PAGENAME}}
 |debut =

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 |notes =
-'''{{PAGENAME}}''' appeared quietly, mysteriously and quite suddenly over the [[Gaines River]] in 2013. They attracted a lot of attention from all over the world.  When they opened, a [[Telseth|large humanoid form]], about thirty feet in height emerged.  He talked of being an ambassador or representative from the "start-spanning Kvurri."  Not much other information about himself or his civilization has been forthcoming.  But he has a learned a great deal about us.  He has also recruited a human, [[Ben Pullam]] as an Earthling representative to learn more.
+'''{{PAGENAME}}''' appeared quietly, mysteriously and quite suddenly over the [[Gaines River]] in 2013. They attracted a lot of attention from all over the world.  When they opened, a [[Telseth|large humanoid form]], about twenty to thirty feet in height emerged.  He talked of being an ambassador or representative from the "start-spanning Kvurri."  Not much other information about himself or his civilization has been forthcoming.  But he has a learned a great deal about us.  He has also recruited a human, [[Ben Pullam]] as an Earthling representative to learn more.
-Ben has gone through the Doors, and into whatever is on the other side. He hasn't come out.
+Ben has gone through the Doors, and into whatever is on the other side. He hasn't come back out.
-Into isn't quite the right term.  It seems more a portal to a place with largish, but not outrageous dimensions.  Similar to a cargo ship perhaps.  Big enough to carry an ample supply of artifacts and samples of earth culture back to wherever.
+'Into' isn't quite the right term.  It seems more a portal to a place with largish, but not outrageous dimensions.  Similar to a cargo ship perhaps.  Big enough to carry an ample supply of artifacts and samples of earth culture back to wherever.
 The Doors still hover over the river. Opening for supplies and samples. Not much else.

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 |creator =
-|subcategory = Landmarks
+|subcategory = Gizmos and Gadgets
 }}
 {{DEFAULTSORT: Doors}}

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 |notes =
-The doors appeared quietly, mysteriously and quite suddenly over the [[Gaines River]] in 2013. They attracted a lot of attention from all over the world.  When they opened, a [[Telseth|large humanoid form]], about thirty feet in height emerged.  He talked of being an ambassador or representative from the "start-spanning Kvurri."  Not much other information about himself or his civilization has been forthcoming.  But he has a learned a great deal about us.  He has also recruited a human, [[Ben Pullam]] as representative to learn more.
+'''{{PAGENAME}}''' appeared quietly, mysteriously and quite suddenly over the [[Gaines River]] in 2013. They attracted a lot of attention from all over the world.  When they opened, a [[Telseth|large humanoid form]], about thirty feet in height emerged.  He talked of being an ambassador or representative from the "start-spanning Kvurri."  Not much other information about himself or his civilization has been forthcoming.  But he has a learned a great deal about us.  He has also recruited a human, [[Ben Pullam]] as an Earthling representative to learn more.
-Ben has gone in the doors... he hasn't come out.
+Ben has gone in the Doors... he hasn't come out.
-Inside isn't quite the right term.  It seems more a portal to a place with reasonable, but not outrageous dimensions.  Similar to a cargo ship perhaps.  Big enough to carry an ample supply of artifacts and samples of earth culture.
+Inside isn't quite the right term.  It seems more a portal to a place with largish, but not outrageous dimensions.  Similar to a cargo ship perhaps.  Big enough to carry an ample supply of artifacts and samples of earth culture back to wherever.
-The doors still hover over the river. Opening for supplies, not much else. So far...
+The Doors still hover over the river. Opening for supplies and samples. Not much else. So far...
 |creator =