The Silver Agent's Adventures in Time - Revision history

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 === Time shift.. ===
-When the remnants of human civilization were bifurcated into feral women who rode giant hamsters and barbarian men, the Agent united the genders once more.
+When the remnants of human civilization were bifurcated into feral women and barbarian men, the Agent re-united the genders.
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-In 1973 the [[Silver Agent]] was brought by means of a chrono-harpoon into the 43rd century, a device developed by by the [[Silver Centurions]] as a tool to aid them in their fight against the [[iGod]]. After a prolonged five year battle, with the Centurions emerging victorious, the Silver Agent felt something tugging at him that this wasn't where he belonged. Even though his future-friends were against it and encourage him to stay with them in their time period, he knows he has to return back to his time.
+In 1973 the [[Silver Agent]] travelled to the 43rd century by means of a chrono-harpoon, a time travel device developed by the [[Silver Centurions]]. Teleporting people from various times was one of many tools use aid them in their battles against the an all-powerful being called the [[iGod]]. After a prolonged five year battle, the Centurions emerge victorious and ghosts of the past begin tugging at the Silver Agent, letting him know that long term, this wasn't where he belonged.
-His time journey back, took a stuttering path; traversing a segment of timeline bracketed by the 43rd century on one end and the late 1970s in his own timeline on the other.
+It required several time leaps and stops along the way. At some, the intrusion was peaceful, others required his special skills as a superhuman force to resolve the conflicts that brought him to that period in time.
 ===First Time Shift Back... ===
-At his furthermost future time point, Earth is a battlefield for two humongous titans, the [[Silicoids]]. One is a rocky giant, almost a mountain in dimensions and shaped in a humanoid fashion.  The other, avian in form, a glass-like composition, and a shape of sharp angles and planes shaped like a winged raptor.  It is a fractal nightmare.
+At his furthermost future time point, Earth is a battlefield for two gigantic titans, known as the [[Silicoids]]. One is a rocky giant, almost a mountain in dimensions and shaped in a humanoid fashion.  The other, avian in form, a glass-like composition with a shape of sharp angles and planes forming a winged raptor.  It is a fractal nightmare.
-What the two towering figures share is a "harmonic madness," continuing propelling them into raging combat with one another. With the help of people of that era, the Silver Agent retrieves the necessary data to cure that madness.
+The two towering figures share a "harmonic madness," constantly propelling them into raging combat. With the help of the people of that era, the Silver Agent retrieves the necessary data to cure them of their madness.
 === Time shift... ===
-In a future somewhat less distant, yet still far displaced, Earth is was under an invasion by the insectoid [[Hive Warriors]]. The Silver Agent fought beside the [[Steelhearts]], men and women who sacrificed their very physical bodies to become battle-worthy robots, to break the aliens' attack on the country-to-come known as Ohmerika. The victory was not without cost; their supply of pseudo-plasma destroyed, the Steelhearts could no longer regain their lost humanity.
+Time shift to In a future somewhat less distant, yet still far displaced, Earth is plagued by an invasion of insectoid [[Hive Warriors]]. The Silver Agent fought beside the [[Steelhearts]], men and women who sacrificed their human forms to become battle-worthy robots. Their goal was to break the aliens' attack on a country that would soon become known as Ohmerika. The victory was not without cost. Their supply of pseudo-plasma destroyed, the Steelhearts could no longer regain their lost humanity.
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 It required several time leaps and stops along the way. At some, the intrusion was peaceful, others required his special skills as a superhuman force to resolve the conflicts that brought him to that point in time.
-===The Return Adventures===
+===First Time Shift Back... ===
 At his furthermost future time point, Earth is a battlefield for two humongous titans, the [[Silicoids]]. One is a rocky giant, almost a mountain in dimensions and shaped in a humanoid fashion.  The other, avian in form, a glass-like composition, and a shape of sharp angles and planes shaped like a winged raptor.  It is a fractal nightmare.
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 What the two towering figures share is a "harmonic madness," continuing propelling them into raging combat with one another. With the help of people of that era, the Silver Agent retrieves the necessary data to cure that madness.
-=== title ===
+=== Time shift... ===
 In a future somewhat less distant, yet still far displaced, Earth is was under an invasion by the insectoid [[Hive Warriors]]. The Silver Agent fought beside the [[Steelhearts]], men and women who sacrificed their very physical bodies to become battle-worthy robots, to break the aliens' attack on the country-to-come known as Ohmerika. The victory was not without cost; their supply of pseudo-plasma destroyed, the Steelhearts could no longer regain their lost humanity.
-=== title ===
+=== Time shift... ===
 Time-shift again to a flooded world. The Silver Agent rides with the [[Aqua-Knights]], armored warriors whose steeds very much resemble seahorses, if seahorses were large enough to be ridden saddle-back. They sported jutting, seaweed-like growths from their hides. As a team they found the means to lower the water levels, returning dry land masses on a global scale.
-=== title ===
+=== Time shift... ===
 In a shadowy military command center, he viewed holographic displays and discussed with military commanders and leaders the strategies of their desperate struggle.
-=== title ===
+=== Time shift.. ===
 When the remnants of human civilization were bifurcated into feral women who rode giant hamsters and barbarian men, the Agent united the genders once more.
-=== title ===
+=== Time shift... ===
 Ascending [[Mount Kirby]] against winds and pounding rain, he and others found the lost library (whose robots were, fortunately, still functioning) that would help rebuild the world.
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+|notes = each time shift needs a title, and exposition explaining that with each, the Silver Agent is getting closer and closer to his own time period and the doom that awaits him there.  Talking a bit more about the impact of that doom might also help.  Sentence structures and information provided is also very spotty and incomplete.  I clean up the first entries a bit, but things really get cloudy at the end.
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+|notes = each time shift needs a title, and exposition explaining that with each, the Silver Agent is getting closer and closer to his own time period and the doom that awaits him there.  Talking a bit more about the impact of that doom might also help.
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-In 1973 the [[Silver Agent]] was brought by means of chrono-harpoon into the 43rd century, by the Silver Centurions]]. While he eventually made his way back home, he took a stuttering path; traversing that segment of timeline bracketed by the 43rd century on one end and his own time on the other, he made a number of stops along the way. At some of these stops he passed the time there peacefully, while at others he fought and strive.
+In 1973 the [[Silver Agent]] was brought by means of chrono-harpoon into the 43rd century, by the [[Silver Centurions]] to help them in their fight against the [[iGod]]. After a prolonged five year battle, with the Centurions emerging victorious, the Silver Agent felt something tugging at him that this wasn't where he belonged. Even though his friends try to talk him out of it, he knows he has to return back to his time. he  <br>
-In one future era, Earth had become the battlefield of the two humongous titans, the [[Silicoids]]. One was a rocky giant, almost a mountain shaped into man shape. The other, avian and resembling a more glass-like form of the mineral both derived their name from, was all angles and planes, a winged raptor that was also a fractal nightmare. What the two towering figures shared was their "harmonic madness," which drove them into raging combat with one another. Alongside the people of that era, the Agent retrieved from a bunker the necessary data to cure that madness.
+While he eventually made his way back home, he took a stuttering path; traversing that segment of timeline bracketed by the 43rd century on one end and his own time on the other, he made a number of stops along the way. At some of these stops he passed the time there peacefully, while at others he fought and strive.
 In a future somewhat less distant, yet still far, far way, Earth was under invasion by the insectoid [[Hive Warriors]]. The Silver Agent fought beside the [[Steelhearts]], men and women who sacrificed their very physical bodies to become battle-worthy robots, to break the aliens' attack on the country-to-come known as Ohmerika. The victory was not without cost; their supply of pseudo-plasm destroyed, the Steelhearts could no longer regain their lost humanity.

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−	In 1973 the [[Silver Agent]] was brought by means of chrono-harpoon into the 43rd century, by the Silver Centurions]]. ~~When~~ he eventually made his way back home, he took a stuttering path; traversing that segment of timeline bracketed by the 43rd century on one end and his own time on the other, he made a number of stops along the way. At some of these stops he passed the time there peacefully, while at others he fought and strive.	+	In 1973 the [[Silver Agent]] was brought by means of chrono-harpoon into the 43rd century, by the Silver Centurions]]. While he eventually made his way back home, he took a stuttering path; traversing that segment of timeline bracketed by the 43rd century on one end and his own time on the other, he made a number of stops along the way. At some of these stops he passed the time there peacefully, while at others he fought and strive.

	In one future era, Earth had become the battlefield of the two humongous titans, the [[Silicoids]]. One was a rocky giant, almost a mountain shaped into man shape. The other, avian and resembling a more glass-like form of the mineral both derived their name from, was all angles and planes, a winged raptor that was also a fractal nightmare. What the two towering figures shared was their "harmonic madness," which drove them into raging combat with one another. Alongside the people of that era, the Agent retrieved from a bunker the necessary data to cure that madness.		In one future era, Earth had become the battlefield of the two humongous titans, the [[Silicoids]]. One was a rocky giant, almost a mountain shaped into man shape. The other, avian and resembling a more glass-like form of the mineral both derived their name from, was all angles and planes, a winged raptor that was also a fractal nightmare. What the two towering figures shared was their "harmonic madness," which drove them into raging combat with one another. Alongside the people of that era, the Agent retrieved from a bunker the necessary data to cure that madness.

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 This and more he experienced on the way home...
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