Wolfspider - Revision history

Infobroker: The smallest fraction of anything would be infinitely small.

2017-09-21T17:47:17Z

The smallest fraction of anything would be infinitely small.

Astrozac at 05:38, 18 September 2017

2017-09-18T05:38:31Z

Infobroker: add issues of interest

2017-04-13T04:13:03Z

add issues of interest

Infobroker at 16:05, 8 April 2017

2017-04-08T16:05:37Z

Infobroker: nor can it detect run on sentences frowns

2017-04-08T16:03:32Z

nor can it detect run on sentences *frowns*

Infobroker: Well shucks, looks like you need the paid version of Grammarly to auto-detect passive voice. RATS!

2017-04-08T15:56:37Z

Well shucks, looks like you need the paid version of Grammarly to auto-detect passive voice. RATS!

Astrozac at 05:57, 5 April 2017

2017-04-05T05:57:27Z

Dornbeast at 20:09, 27 August 2016

2016-08-27T20:09:07Z

Infobroker: remove spoiler alert

2016-01-27T08:02:14Z

remove spoiler alert

Infobroker at 02:27, 10 November 2015

2015-11-10T02:27:40Z

← Older revision		Revision as of 17:47, 21 September 2017
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−	He has the ability to shrink down in size to ~~the smallest~~ fraction of ~~the average~~ adult~~, not even half a foot in~~ height.	+	He has the ability to shrink down in size to slightly less that half a foot. A fraction of a typical human adult's height.

← Older revision		Revision as of 05:38, 18 September 2017
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−	He has the ability to shrink down in size to the smallest fraction of ~~a normal~~ adult's, not even half a foot in height.	+	He has the ability to shrink down in size to the smallest fraction of the average adult, not even half a foot in height.

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 |footnotes =
 }}
 [[Category:Heroes]][[Category: Non-Astro City Based Heroes]]

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 |history =
-A size-shifting superhero out of Australia, '''Wolfspider''' is one of Honor Guard's newest recruits. Bitten by a rare, exotic, and unfortunately deadly spider, the young Ben Colstone is injected with experimental drugs to save his life. More misfortune strikes when unusual side-effects cause Ben to shrink in size. With the help of his mother, a brilliant scientist specializing in adapting organic entomological systems into modern technologies, he gained four additional appendages and learned how to control them. They were artificial, but young could control them via his venom altered brain and nervous system.
+A size-shifting superhero out of Australia, '''Wolfspider''' is one of Honor Guard's newest recruits. Bitten by a rare, exotic, and unfortunately deadly spider, the young Ben Colstone is injected with experimental drugs to save his life. More misfortune strikes when unusual side-effects cause Ben to shrink in size. With the help of his mother, a brilliant scientist specializing in adapting organic entomological systems into modern technologies, he gained four additional appendages and learned how to control them. They were artificial, but young Ben could control them via his venom altered brain and nervous system.
 Wolfspider appeared with his teammates for a charity function in Australia. The money was for a new wing of a hospital. ("[[Welcome to HumanoGlobal]]")

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 His flying vehicle serves as both his mode of transportation and as his primary weapons system. It projects "venom-bursts" that can serve a variety of functions, including stunning enemies and melting steel. While they seem a mechanical extension of the vehicle, the venom bursts are controlled and emanate directly from Wolfspider himself. Something he doesn't like being known to others.
-|observations = Wolfspider is a long-time fan of the fictional superhero team Queenslaw; his apartment in San Francisco has several Queenslaw action figures on a shelf, and a Ute is sitting on the coffee table.
+|observations = Wolfspider is a long-time fan of the fictional superhero team Queenslaw. His San Francisco apartment has several Queenslaw action figures on a shelf along with the '''Ute''' figurine sitting on a coffee table.
 |speculations =

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 {{Character infobox2
-|image        = Image:wolfspider.jpg
+|image = Image:wolfspider.jpg
-|imagewidth   = 320
+|imagewidth = 320
-|status       = Active
+|status = Active
-|realname     = Ben Colstone
+|realname = Ben Colstone
-|debut        = {{AC}} # 2
+|debut = {{AC}} # 2
-|origin       =
+|origin =
-|affiliation  =[[Honor Guard]]
+|affiliation =[[Honor Guard]]
-|baseops      = Australia
+|baseops = Australia
-|rangeops     = Global with Honor Guard
+|rangeops = Global with Honor Guard
-|relatives    =
+|relatives =
-|aliases       =
+|aliases =
-|occupation    =
+|occupation =
-|birthdate     =  1986/1987
+|birthdate = 1986/1987
 |maritalstatus =
-|height        =
+|height =
-|weight        =
+|weight =
-|eyes          =
+|eyes =
-|hair          =
+|hair =
-|appearances   = {{AC}} [[{{AC}} No.2|#2]], 3, 17, 27, 28 <br>
+|appearances = {{AC}} [[{{AC}} No.2|#2]], 3, 17, 27, 28 <br>
   }}
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 |history =
-A size-shifting superhero out of Australia, '''Wolfspider''' is one of Honor Guard's newest recruits. Bitten by a rare, exotic, and unfortunately deadly spider,  the young Ben Colstone is injected with experimental drugs to save his life. More misfortune strikes when unusual side-effects cause Ben to shrink in size.  With the help of his mother, a brilliant scientist specializing in adapting organic entomological systems into modern technologies, he gained four additional appendages and learned how to control them.  They were artificial, but the control was done via his venom altered brain and nervous system.
+A size-shifting superhero out of Australia, '''Wolfspider''' is one of Honor Guard's newest recruits. Bitten by a rare, exotic, and unfortunately deadly spider, the young Ben Colstone is injected with experimental drugs to save his life. More misfortune strikes when unusual side-effects cause Ben to shrink in size. With the help of his mother, a brilliant scientist specializing in adapting organic entomological systems into modern technologies, he gained four additional appendages and learned how to control them. They were artificial, but young could control them via his venom altered brain and nervous system.
 Wolfspider appeared with his teammates for a charity function in Australia. The money was for a new wing of a hospital. ("[[Welcome to HumanoGlobal]]")
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 |equipment =
-His flying vehicle serves as both his mode of transportation and as his primary weapons system. It projects "venom-bursts" that can serve a variety of functions, including stunning enemies and melting steel. While they seem a mechanical extension of the vehicle, the venom bursts are controlled  and emanate directly from Wolfspider himself. Something he doesn't like being known to others.
+His flying vehicle serves as both his mode of transportation and as his primary weapons system. It projects "venom-bursts" that can serve a variety of functions, including stunning enemies and melting steel. While they seem a mechanical extension of the vehicle, the venom bursts are controlled and emanate directly from Wolfspider himself. Something he doesn't like being known to others.
 |observations = Wolfspider is a long-time fan of the fictional superhero team Queenslaw; his apartment in San Francisco has several Queenslaw action figures on a shelf, and a Ute is sitting on the coffee table.

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 |eyes          =
 |hair          =
-|appearances   = {{AC}} #2, 3, 17, 27, 28 <br>
+|appearances   = {{AC}} [[{{AC}} No.2|#2]], 3, 17, 27, 28 <br>
   }}

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 |powers =
 He has the ability to shrink down in size to the smallest fraction of a normal adult's, not even half a foot in height.
-The venom bursts are controlled by Wolfspider even though most of the time they are projected from his cycle.
 |equipment =
-His flying vehicle serves as both his primary weapon and transport. The vehicle is equipped with "venom-bursts" that
+His flying vehicle serves as both his mode of transportation and as his primary weapons system. It projects "venom-bursts" that can serve a variety of functions, including stunning enemies and melting steel. While they seem a mechanical extension of the vehicle, the venom bursts are controlled  and emanate directly from Wolfspider himself. Something he doesn't like being known to others.
 |observations =